Okidokie lets get this party started .___.

Baww anyway, critic...yeh


Ok first things first he's super awesome and I think I want his babys. You always have mega origanal ideas becuse your brains awesome like that but this guy if pretty darn epic. Humanized machine people have been done befor for all of the game consels but your guy seems more uniqe then them seeing as he doesen't blatantly look like he was made to a resemble an X box o3o His outfit it also very spiffeh |D especily the scarf. NOW ON TO THE NASTY PARTS >D


i lie ;3;

I wont be mean

Anatomy wise he looks kinda...off. not everything mind that, just his neck and his arms (which I know I cant say anything about but fff we're talking about YOU so yeh ) His neck seems kinda to skinny to hold his head up and in comparison to his shoulders the curve is to.......little? I don't know. But it just looks kinda weird to me. While everything else face wise looks perfect his mouth seems a little off centerd. I know you were going for a jaunty smile (or whatever the hell you'd call it XD) but it doesen't seem to match with the rest of it, also his adems apple is a little asque .__. But his nose is fucking sexy
-wants-
It may just be becuse you left off the hands but the arms seem at at odd angle but the more I look the more I think i'm wrong so maybe they arnt but still, it looks very uncomfortable whatever he's doing.

As i've all ready said the outfit is frigging awesome but to make it 'op' more shading would do the trick |3 but seeing as i've seen your shadign and I know how wonderfull it is i guess this isen't really somthing to 'improve' persay, just add.

Overall he's super aweosme and you better draw him more becuase he's so frigging coolio XD and I'd love to see him coloured o3o there are just the few tiny things I mentioned which coudl be improved but w/e :3